I sens a sense of revulsion towards the reader for whom this poem was intended, be that a real person or purely fictional. It’s almost like you’re speaking to yourself. I love the darkness of it and the way you worded your warning about some “disease” s/he (the reader) my catch from your words, from the poem.

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